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Your own original 4-verse poetry.
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Roxrider_USA said on March 24, 2003 18:13:
Hello!!! What you guys and girls out there that are interested think about posting here our own original 4-verse poetry. If you’d like, you can even dedicate it to someone here at TDR or from somewhere else. Hope you join in. Want to see all the criative poetic lines you come up with.
Here i go:
With water you calm down and refresh the passion i feel for you.
With fire you excite and burst that same passion contained in my body.
Water or fire, you soothe or burn.
Water and fire, i beg to swim in your ocean of fire.
Well, this one goes to Mel specially, but also to all poetry lovers out there. :-)
Take care!
Carlos E., New York.
vaxjoe said on March 25, 2003 05:51:
i have nothing ready so i’ll just write whatever comes in my mind....
My hearts bleeding my souls crying
Cruel world we share, theres no denying
So wake up raise your fist and yell
We re all here, silence must be heard!
Roxrider_USA said on March 25, 2003 18:34:
@Vaxjoe: Cool. Like the hidden meaning that those words carry. :-)!!
Later!
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on March 25, 2003 19:57:
The writer wrote three lines :
The first one which he read alone.
The second one which everybody read.
The third one which no one read.
And the third one is me .... so please read ME !
Santi said on March 25, 2003 20:11:
Roses are red
violet blue
and I just wanna say
Wendy I love you!
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDD
wendy said on March 25, 2003 20:12:
Some loves one
some loves two
but i’m the one
who’s in love with YOU
For Santi ;)
Roxrider_USA said on March 25, 2003 21:21:
@Mel: Aww, there’s no way i can resist this. You are too cute. Te adoro. :-).
@Wendy and Santi: Awesome! Take care of each other. :-)
Later!
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on March 26, 2003 10:38:
You came from the black horses land,
Somewhere in the sky.
I came from the white birds land,
Somewhere you were passing by.
We met each other in the red apples land,
Somewhere in my passion lullaby.
Does the horse of you feed the bird of me ?
Then what about God’s forgiveness,
Will he take us high ?
Roxrider_USA said on March 26, 2003 15:43:
@Mel: Beautiful. :-). I really like that poetic side of yours. Keep it up, Mel. Muahhh.
Take care.
Carlos E., New York.
vaxjoe said on March 26, 2003 20:29:
We used to run down the street
swimming naked in our lake
I wish i was mirrored in your eyes
And wash away all the pain
vaxjoe said on March 26, 2003 20:38:
i have another one in the beginning of the thread..quite different from the last one though.
Twilight-Ghost said on March 27, 2003 16:09:
I’ve written a lot of poems, but this is the most simple and the shortest one I’ve written. I don’t have any 4-versed ones. So, I guess I just have to share this 8-versed poem.
——————————————–
Within my heart you play a key
everytime you look at me
your gentle touch would swell within
as your fingers touch my skin
Your kiss sends shivers down my spine
your voice is a song in my mind
your eyes are pretty to see
your love is music to me.
—————————————–
I just remembered...... I do have a short poem...... I’m not sure if it is even a poem.... here it is.....
—————————————–
My only advice to you
is do not procrastinate
for when you finally do something
sometimes it is too late
Roxrider_USA said on March 27, 2003 18:18:
@everyone: Cool guys. I’m having lots of fun reading these great lines. It’s so interesting.
Keep it up!
@Mel: Muahhh!! Liked it ? :-).
Carlos E., New York.
Ally87 said on March 27, 2003 21:41:
mostly mine’s depressing, some in german, most in english, but its upstairs so i’ll post some another time.... you know, i was gonna start a topic like this!!
Ally87 said on March 28, 2003 19:00:
@santi: nah, diff. ppl... sorry to confuse you (2 ally’s from the uk!!) my old nick was the phantom roxer.... neway!! i started writing poetry again after about 5 years the other day so at the moment its kinda s***, but this is one of the 1st ones i wrote, it was kinda inspired by the Ace of base song, Ravine:
She stands alone in the ravine,
Her view of the world obscured by trees,
The solitary drops begin to fall,
Her cheeks wet from the floods,
She attempts to break her chains,
To escape her ravine.
She wants to fly
She wanders the plains of solitude,
She walks the streets of despair,
By shackles she is bound,
Her faith nailed to a cross,
Her hope lies on the floor.
But her sun will rise again.
She will fly.
Roxrider_USA said on March 28, 2003 19:20:
@Ally87: We feel very glad to have one of your firts poem posted here after the 5 year break you took from poetry. Thanks, friend. Interesting imagery in those words.
Let’s see what i can write right here on the spot:
Blowing across the lakes, dropplets of water fly and give life to all the needy ones.
Blowing across the mountains, flakes of snow fly and allows life to go on.
Blowing high in the sky, moist cottons deliver the so awaited freshness.
Across the continents it blows and blows.
Never letting down the ones who need it so much.
The wind!
Responsible for blowing my warm feeling of love all the way to my deepest lake, highest mountain and brightest sky;
Mel.
:-)!
Later, friends!
Carlos E., New York.
vaxjoe said on March 29, 2003 15:21:
Hey you, could be a superstar tonight
Hey you, follow those lights shining bright
Dont be scared, it maybe only a dream
Step inside and feel the power within
Ally87 said on March 29, 2003 19:49:
“What’s it to you?”
They stop and they stare,
Their pallid faces gaze and condemn,
They watch through unforgiving eyes,
Hearts of steel with no emotion,
They cannot break, they cannot love.
“What’s it to you?”
They don’t complain,
They can’t comprehend,
What’s it to them?
Our suffering hearts,
Our outcast souls.
But for no longer,
We break society’s chains,
Ignore their ’constraints’,
Finally free, free to love.
They will suffer,
They are outcast.
Aaso said on March 30, 2003 14:43:
Carl great!!! *kisses* :DDD
THIS IS NOT MINE!!
It’s only a translation. The original one is Farsi (my language) . I just like it very much :)
Your body reminds me of A hot summer noon
The color of your eyes reminds me of the rain
My life is just like a prison when you’re not by myside
You are beautiful like the moment that rain comes down
You are great just like the moon in my nights ...
I need to see you everyday
I need to hear you saying “I love you” ....
Roxrider_USA said on March 31, 2003 14:22:
@Mel: Muahh... Wow, i like that poem ;-) !!! Things going through my mind right now ... lol
Miss you lots Mel. Get online, babe!!! Hope you are alright.
Take care.
Carlos E., New York.
vaxjoe said on March 31, 2003 14:50:
There u go carlos with my latest one:
Look around, find yourself, you re closer everyday
Hear me out, dont let go, i got something to say
All that you ve learned, all that you hide
Nothing stands still, kill the demons inside
hey hey
Drown me again make me alive
I wouldnt care, you couldnt mine
Drown me again into your soul
Would i be a fool, its you i adore
Speak of love, like a child, a magic fairytale
I am a knight who kills the beast, save the queen
All that you ve known try to forget
Noone now cries, no pain again
vaxjoe said on March 31, 2003 14:57:
For those who may not understand: Its about Free Love with no strings attached. Free love between lovers or friends, the kind of love who sets u free...no jealousy no pain no fight..
just b4 anyone else analyzes :p
(evil laugh)
Roxrider_USA said on March 31, 2003 15:10:
@Vaxjoe: Really cool. I really enjoy reading these. :-). Take care, friend.
@others: I’m really glad i’ve created this thread.
Later!
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on March 31, 2003 16:27:
I think we have somany pearls here.
i wish I could do that too :) *sigh*
Ally87 said on March 31, 2003 17:27:
aww!
@carlos: great idea!! we should really have a whole section for poetry and other arty stuff like some other forums do...
only problem is i keep getting told off in class for writing poetry!!
Aaso said on March 31, 2003 20:31:
Is it love, When you’re looking to my eyes ?
Is it love, When you’re playing with my hair ties?
Is it love, When I’m here waiting for you?
Is it love, When my dreams wont come true?
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
I was dreaming about you last night
You were holding me so tight
I was whispering in your ear
You were cleaning away my tear
Carl, will I again dream about you tonight??
Roxrider_USA said on March 31, 2003 21:28:
@Mel: As long as you feel this nice feeling you will dream many more nights. Btw, can you hear me whispering, “I’m here to take you to the stars” . Listen, i’m whispering right now, babe. Take care, flor. MUAHHHHH!! :-).
@Ally87: Yep that’s a nice idea. Concerning the class issue, well, just don’t give up, friend!!! :-).
Take care!
Carlos E., New York.
vaxjoe said on April 2, 2003 04:48:
...and this is my vax goes hard rock piece:
Your sick fascination, your childhood obsession
For massive destruction, what a guilty satisfaction
You think you are the king, a modern Neron
I hope you burn in hell, you bloody murderer
purplemedusa said on April 2, 2003 08:50:
LOL, I know babes!! I’m in such good spirits this morn’ that it doesn’t reflect how i feel - hence I’m pushing it ourt of my system!!
But so glad to see you again!!
Many XXXXX’s
vaxjoe said on April 2, 2003 09:01:
yeah im fine too but when i came in to write my thing for today for carlos i thought to take out all the anger i have about a certain man we all know who
i can only write bout what touches me the most that certain moment ..otherwise i dont bother to cause it’ll turn up to be something fake
purplemedusa said on April 2, 2003 09:07:
You’re such a sweet & sensitive soul, my dear Vax!! I treasure that!
vaxjoe said on April 2, 2003 09:11:
hehe blessed these ppl that reminded me that i shouldnt give up writing...
so what is your blonde butt up to? :p
purplemedusa said on April 2, 2003 09:15:
Well, was searching furiously for you! I missed class (I’m so dead... the lecturer & my friend expected me to be there!) but what can I do ... I overslept (had a beautiful dream & didn’t want to wake-up!) and now I’m typing away in the computerlab... It’s a way to gather my chickens! Will go down to my friends place later to go and plea some sorry excuse, though!
vaxjoe said on April 2, 2003 09:19:
hahaha medusa getting in trouble...i’d love to see that...mr organised overslept, missed class, has to make excuses..that sounds like me...constantly sleeping or wanting to sleep, being late ALWAYS to meet friends, hitting the snooze button in the morning million times, finally getting up in bad mood looking for coffee and cigarettes...what kind socks we have on today?
purplemedusa said on April 2, 2003 09:30:
LOL... yeah something like that...!! About the socks... you really had me in stiches now... had to check here and realised that it’s to different shades of gray!!! RofLOL!!! It was a bit of a rush to get out of the house this morn’! However, the positive side it that my 507’s is long enough to cover them... no sweat!
vaxjoe said on April 2, 2003 09:36:
lol how kewl! i should mail some white athletic long ones! ;o)
Im so happy my friend from Finland, Riitta is here so i started being sociable again hehe!
purplemedusa said on April 2, 2003 09:40:
LOL 2 Vax & his white sox!!!
Oh babes, so glad that u have some company there! Wish I could take off some time to come & visit!!
vaxjoe said on April 2, 2003 10:05:
No actually i had a call from my friend back home so....but u re busy with monsieur carbone.
purplemedusa said on April 2, 2003 10:08:
YEs, r we jealose? I can do more than one thing at a time, ya know...
purplemedusa said on April 2, 2003 11:04:
Vax... I do apologize for creating this potentially explosive situation - it was unintentianal.
Love always - Me*
Roxrider_USA said on April 2, 2003 14:56:
Hello guys! Mel are you prepared for the following ? Hope so! Te adoro. mauhhhh
Can’t resist.
Temptation’s intense.
Heart’s pounding.
Desperation all over.
Pain’s not the issue.
But desire.
Darkness falls.
Can’t see a thing.
Blinded by the night’s loneliness.
Fear of not finding you.
A warming feeling grabs me.
Yes, i start to see!
Give me more!
Of that bright shining light
that not other person besides you can display.
Thus, leading me to you.
Destroying all the fear.
Rising the sun.
Trashing the loneliness.
However,
passionately intesifying the temptation.
The desire for your lips;
warmth and smell of your skin.
Take care!
Carlos E., New York.
Ally87 said on April 2, 2003 15:47:
@ carlos: i don’t follow up poems like that with my own!!! btw: wanna talk to LEO or Visa bout it?
Aaso said on April 2, 2003 18:40:
2 Carl .... I miss you that much you know ;P
Isn’t he a cute guy to make such a feeling??
Aaso said on April 3, 2003 12:36:
Carl today is absoluetly a better day as my wall paper is a big red rose :))
I wake up in the morning,
reminding my last night dream about you.
I look into the mirror,
seeking your face through the silver glass.
I put on my cloths,
asking myself what color would you like most.
I go to the streets,
wondering if people know about my happiness.
I watch birds flying over me,
shaking my hand to those couples of luck.
I talk to my BOSS,
wishing you were here to kick him in the a**.
I come back home after a long tedious day;
Taking a shower, each water drop calls your name.
I turn on my computer,
praying not to have a problem in my messenger again.
I chat with you passionately,
trying to keep my patience over far distances.
I go to bed so late ad so cold inside,
closing my eyes and wishing to see you again ....
Aaso said on April 3, 2003 13:21:
lolzzzz ... I think it’s only Aaso’s problem !!!! I can not limit it!!
Roxrider_USA said on April 3, 2003 15:16:
@Santi: Yes, i guess that even i don’t. lol. Well, since people feel like writing more than 4 verses, it’s alright. See, i’ve followed them!!!! :-). What’s cool is that people are posting their amazing lines.
Later! Mel, muahhh. Miss you!
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on April 3, 2003 17:42:
I think mine is not exactly poem!!!! Just some words, I feel I can put together. So sorry for spoiling this thread:)
Roxrider_USA said on April 3, 2003 18:41:
@Mel: “I think mine is not exactly poem!!!!” . Concerning that, what you wrote is actually a poem look closely:
“I wake up in the morning,
reminding my last night dream about you.”
Carlos: For sure, it was amazing...
“I look into the mirror,
seeking your face through the silver glass.”
Carlos: If you close your eyes, your mind will display my image...
“I put on my cloths,
asking myself what color would you like most.”
Carlos: Blue or red would enchant me...
“I go to the streets,
wondering if people know about my happiness.”
Carlos: Your shining smiley eyes say everything...
“I watch birds flying over me,
shaking my hand to those couples of luck.”
Carlos: Couple of lucky like Mel and Carl...
“I talk to my BOSS,
wishing you were here to kick him in the a**.”
Carlos: It would be my pleasure...
“I come back home after a long tedious day;”
Carlos: Looking forward for a firey night...
“Taking a shower, each water drop calls your name.”
Carlos: Each and every one of my touches makes you want more...
“I turn on my computer,
praying not to have a problem in my messenger again.”
Carlos: Messages from my heart will always reach you...
“I chat with you passionately,
trying to keep my patience over far distances.”
Carlos: Passion that for moments seem to turn far into near...
“I go to bed so late and so cold inside,
closing my eyes and wishing to see you again ....”
Carlos: Once you hit the matress, the sun here is just starting the warm me after a long lonely and cold cold, yes, cold night...
The sun tells me that we are beautiful...
Take care! (Mel, it is a poem!!) :-)
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on April 3, 2003 19:01:
wowowow .... You have again catch me ..... :D Dooset Daram!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The sun is our messenger :)))
Roxrider_USA said on April 3, 2003 19:50:
@Mel: You got it!!! :-)!! Dooset Daram!! Stay well!
Carlos E., New York.
Roxrider_USA said on April 7, 2003 19:09:
Mel’s lovely.
Lovely just like love.
Lovely just like a child’s smile.
Lovely like a rainy evening.
Lovely like beauty of your hair floating in the breeze.
In the breeze.
In the bubble shaped heart.
Mel’s lovely.
Lovely like a snow flake.
Lovely like life itself.
Lovely like the tip of your cute nose.
Lovely like the smile in your eyes when you’re sleeping.
When you’re sleeping.
When you’re sleeping in my arms...
Te amo Mel!!! Take care!!! :-)
Carlos E., New York.
Roxrider_USA said on April 7, 2003 19:58:
Glad i can some how affect people with my small poems.
Take care.
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on April 10, 2003 20:15:
Carl every one like it but I am the one who is drowning in them :D
Aaso said on April 10, 2003 21:02:
Carl,
your love is like a shadow.
I will carry it every where.
Your words are like a breeze.
I will air my hairs in them.
Your smile is like a flower.
I will put it on my hairs.
Your arms are like a refuge.
I will lay on them to be safe.
Your lips are like red wine.
I will taste them though I can fly.
Your body is like a boat.
I will sail so far.
Your desire is like a SUN.
I will get hot as it rises up ....
meu bonito! Te amoooooooo!!
Roxrider_USA said on April 11, 2003 13:53:
@Mel: Wow, your really like the poetic style you have concerning the “spiceness”you add to it. Really, really nice ... :-). I’m so glad you are back. Iwas worried and missed you like crazy!!
Te adoro minha bonita!!!!! muahhhh
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on April 11, 2003 19:53:
Carl ... are you gonna disappear again ???* It’s Sut !!!! :(((
2 Vax ... where is your daily writings ??? I haven’t seen them for a while!
vaxjoe said on April 12, 2003 07:30:
i dont write by order only when inspiration nox...and right now..
im not inspired
Roxrider_USA said on April 14, 2003 17:35:
@Vaxjoe: Hope that the winds blow the inspirations you need your way.
Later!
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on April 14, 2003 20:02:
People, life in general .... its really a general answer :)
Carl, so quiet!!!
Roxrider_USA said on April 15, 2003 14:02:
@Mel: What do you mean, amor? Are you alright?
I haven’t been able to find you online lately in the morning (US eastern time). Before, we were able to talk in the morning here. Don’t know if you have changed or schedule or not, babe. If you get online in the afternoon more now, you can’t get to talk to me ’cause m,y of my classes occur in the afternoon. So i guess that’s the problem. I miss you lots. See right now it’s 10:02 AM here and i’m hoping you appear... Te amo, Mel. I get sad when i can make you laugh...
Take care, babe. muahhh
Longing for you.
Carlos E., New York.
vaxjoe said on April 15, 2003 19:05:
i meant CERTAIN ppl and CERTAIN incidents of life like a big joy, a great pain, an interesting experience, an incident that catches your eye..
Aaso said on April 15, 2003 20:27:
2 Carl, Those days I was at home. I didn’t go to work .... so I could be online at any time! But now, my work has begin and I can be online at night. I think it will be afternoon there between 4 or 5 :)
2 Vax cool! Can you make songs with your own lyrics??
Roxrider_USA said on April 16, 2003 13:37:
@Mel: Thanks for letting me know, minha bonita. Hope we can talk soon. Miss you lots. Take care! Te adoro. :-)
@Vaxjoe: I wrote a song but, unfortunately, i don’t play any instrumemts at the moment. So, i can’t produce it. It’s called “Needing You”. I keep it in my poetry folder with my poems and the magazines the have a couple of my poems published. Same day it may be used. :-)
Take care!
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on April 16, 2003 19:53:
hey and he will make songs with them?? then what will you feel when you hear them ;) so, so, so amazing...
Aaso said on April 16, 2003 19:57:
Carl, I miss you 2. no 3. no, no .... 1000000000000000000000000000 ...
PS: I didn’t like the end of that game. and ya know it! dontcha??
Roxrider_USA said on April 16, 2003 21:40:
@Mel: Game? You mean that last time we talked, amor ?
Carlos E., Ne wYork.
coyboyusa said on April 17, 2003 16:20:
noone makes saying
i love you
such a useless diatribe
the way you do
lol mine tend to be really depressing as well..it helped me get through alot i have somewhere along the lines of 500-1000 poems i’ve been writing since i was 13
coyboyusa said on April 19, 2003 17:52:
ok tevenso where they hell is your control of anti flamming everyone else is bahaving and sweettalker has yet again ragged on me....not that coming from a country who’s gdp equated that of little more than milk money but oh well hyppocracy
sweet_stalker57 said on April 21, 2003 01:50:
I thought you could write a nice poem for me. :)
What country do you think I am from? :p
Roxrider_USA said on April 21, 2003 17:32:
Come on guys, could you create a new thread and take your differences to it or somewhere else. Please, don’t make this nice thread be shut down because of your differences. I don’t go to threads created by anybody else to start these kinds of unfortunate and disrespecting discussions. So please, stop it. Be more respecting. I’ll get very upset if this thread gets shut down because of such lack of consideration.
@tevensso: Please, could solve this.
Take care, everyone.
Carlos E., New York.
tevensso (moderator) said on April 21, 2003 20:38:
Sorry, can’t be everywhere. What flaming are we talking about here?
Roxrider_USA said on April 21, 2003 20:43:
The coy and sweet issue. I just don’t want this thread to be shut down because of people that can’t discuss their problems properly.
Carlos E., New York.
Roxrider_USA said on April 22, 2003 19:56:
Mel:
I’m blown away...
Blown away by the way you carry yourself.
Blown away by the attetion you give me.
It all makes me crazy for you.
It all makes me want to just fly there.
There, where i can hold you.
Where kisses turn to fire.
Where touches extract whispers of pleasure.
Where smiles reveal the deepest secrets.
It all makes sense.
Doesn’t matter the distance.
All the winds take me there.
There, where i can love you.
Hug you.
See you.
Desire you.
Kiss you.
Protect you.
I’m blown away.
Blown away by who you are.
Blown away by the girl you are.
Mel, sweet and cute.
Mel, my sweet honey.
Preciso de voce.
Hope you like it! I know you’ve missed my poems. I’ll do anything to make you smile! :-) muahhh
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on April 26, 2003 17:11:
HI babe ... yes I really missed your nice words ... *I love them* ;) Gon on meu bonito ! *kisses*
lllalalalallaaalllallala.....
Roxrider_USA said on April 29, 2003 13:20:
@Mel: Miss you lots. Were are you, flor ? Hope you are alright and taking care of yourself. Have you tried to stop that “thing” ? Hope you have.
Te adoro!
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on April 29, 2003 16:18:
Hello babe ... I’m so busy these days due to my job I can not sign in my messenger ... Yes I tried to keep that “thing” away from me ... It’s so hard but I will keep on trying :D Love ya!
How is your wrist babe? (miss you so much :((
Roxrider_USA said on April 29, 2003 17:29:
@Mel: Good. Keep on trying cutie. It will for the best.. Think of how our future can be with that “thing”. :-)
Yep! My wrist is better , although it’s still somewhat sore. Te adoro. Thanks for worrying about it. :-) muahhhhhhh
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on April 30, 2003 15:16:
YES they are!!! Just close your eyes and you can feel the poetry side of them!!!
2 Carl ... I miss you so MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.........!!! :((
Aaso said on April 30, 2003 15:53:
Everytime I turn around you’re there ...
Everytime I look above you’re there ...
Everytime I feel blue you’re there ...
Everytime I need love you’re there ...
You’re everything!
Roxrider_USA said on May 1, 2003 15:52:
@Mel:
I may be everything
but i cannot match your majestic
sweetness.
Carlos E. New York.
Majdy said on May 1, 2003 16:24:
that’s so romantic. wish I could be the part of it, but couldn’t make poem like u guys made.
Aaso said on May 2, 2003 18:12:
2 Carl, you are the sky! my blueman!
2 Majdy, wellcome friend :) just try to write what your heart tells you! I dont think mine is poem but just some words that I love to say!
Aaso said on May 4, 2003 20:47:
When she passed the road to Nowhereland, she was thinking about Past.
When she ran to the Frozenland, she was thinking about Past.
When she tried to kill her dreams, she was thinking about Past.
But now she burns again, she can feel the lost love again.
She is thinking about Future.
Aaso said on May 4, 2003 20:54:
hey when he’s not onlie how can he read his emails :(((((( ?? I miss him very much :(
animalkingdom said on May 4, 2003 21:01:
yees, I miss people too but at least I am not telling the whole world about it.
Oh, I’m sorry; I really am not a poet!
Aaso said on May 4, 2003 21:16:
I read a post from you before ... about that! I can not understand what you mean BUT I can only say
“when I love somebody and I feel like I miss him SO MUCH, I can not keep it in my mind. I will say or write whatever I feel”
So sorry if I made some people feel bad about it :(
Majdy said on May 5, 2003 00:56:
Don’t worry. I guess he’s just busy thinking and making special poem just for you, Aaso! keep on smiling...
Aaso said on May 5, 2003 16:17:
No no! Today is Monday! He should come back today! He should be at school!!! :((
Maybe it’s about his wrist! :(
Aaso said on May 5, 2003 16:41:
My soul is in your body. No it’s just flying around you, trying to find a way in.
Would you please open your eyes and let her in?!
She has no way. She will never come back to me again. ’Cuz she has destroied all the bridges after her. She has to come in.
Let ME in.
Please let ME in !!!
* * * * * * * *
Whenever she walks on the beach,
whenever she picks up the seashells,
whenever she says hello to little black fish jumping out of water,
he is there, watching her secretly.
Whatever she does to stop worrying,
whatever she makes her cold fingers warm,
whatever she tries to keep smiling,
he is there, making her warm with his body secretly.
Wherever she goes after her ambitions,
wherever she flys in her dreams,
wherever she puts her feet on,
he is there, praying for her succeed.
BUT, she knows the Secret !
Roxrider_USA said on May 5, 2003 17:40:
Hey! :-)
Days and nights...
Quite lonely...
Quiet...
Long...
Days are bright blue
but not even that helps.
Nights are dark, cold and blue
but that’s not what i want.
Without you, days lack magic.
Without you, nights turn to pain.
You that needs me so.
You that wants me so.
You that miss me so.
Much.
Yea,
days and nights are quite lonely...
’Cos they don’t matter much
’Cos they don’t mean anything
as long as my lips can’t touch your belly;
as long as my hands can’t touch your face;
as long as my love can’t warm your soul.
Yep, it’s true.
Without you, days lack magic.
Without you, nights turn into tears.
Mel, miss you lots too. Wish i could just appear in front of you whenever you need me. Hope you like this poem. Adore you!! :-)
P.S.: My wrist is much better, angel. muahhhhh
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on May 6, 2003 08:37:
:-)
How easy you can make Mel happy.
How easy you can make her warm.
In that “quite lonely days and nights” ...
Did you know that you can turn your blue nights to red?
Did you know that you can light her fire?
Whatever they say, she will keep wanting you.
It doesn’t really matter!
She will keep missing you ...
Because her “Magic” is your love.
Roxrider_USA said on May 6, 2003 14:16:
Hello!!
My love without your love
is something that can’t survive.
It’s something that won’t see the next morning.
It’s something that just begs to dissipate.
It’s meaningless in all its senses.
My love without your caring
is anything but vibrante.
It’s a rusted box covered with dust.
It’s a rose that lost its petals after a storm.
It’s a tree that loses its leaves
in the wake of a new, long, chilly and sad
“fall” season.
However,
my love with your love and caring
turns it so easy to everyone to see
“How easy you can make” Carl “happy”.
“How easy you can make” him “warm”.
Because your “’Magic’” is my love.
Mel, live life to its fullest. Make it into the one you want it to be. Others can have nice advices, however what you believe in is your main path in life. No one should decide what to do with your life for you. Stay well, angel. :-) muahhhhh
Carlos E. New York.
Aaso said on May 8, 2003 04:13:
NO!!!! I miss you! ;DD I was first!
I’m still trying to save.
Save my life.
No, there’s nothing more outside.
Everything that I need.
I have it. Look! It’s inside.
So close.
Closer than my breath.
Ya know what? I’m talking about my heart.
Ya know it? Actually, it is full of love.
Ya know who? It is YOU!
Yesterday it was raining all the day. It was so amazing :D It is the middle of the Spring. Everything is green. And everyone is happy!
But soon the hot summer will arrive. And I’m still waiting ;D
Have a nice day babe! When will you be online again?!
Aaso said on May 8, 2003 04:15:
And I LOVE your poems *kissessssss* they are really really really .... lovely :D
Roxrider_USA said on May 9, 2003 17:01:
Hi people.
(Lyrics from Christina Aguilera’s Beautiful)
Mel, this is us. :-)
“I am beautiful
No matter what they say
Words can’t bring me down
I am beautiful
In every single way
Yes, words can’t bring me down
Oh no”
“’Cause you are beautiful
No matter what they say
Words can’t bring you down
Oh no
’Cause you are beautiful
In every single way
Yes, words can’t bring you down
Oh no”
“No matter what we do
(No matter what we do)
No matter what we say
(No matter what we say)
We’re the song inside the tune
(Yeah, oh yeah)
Full of beautiful mistakes”
“And everywhere we go
(And everywhere we go)
The sun will always shine
(The sun will always, always, shine)
And tomorrow we might awake
On the other side”
“’Cause we are beautiful
No matter what they say
Yes, words won’t bring us down
Oh no
We are beautiful
In every single way
Yes, words can’t bring us down
Oh no”
We are us and that’s it. Nothing else matters...
Te amo!
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on May 10, 2003 07:23:
Dooset daram khoshgel!!!!!
“I am beautifull, no matter what they say. No words can bring me down...”
I can fly.
Fly with wings of the wind.
I can hold the wheel and drive, since you are the passenger.
My world isn’t empty now, ain’t cold.
I can see the Sun.
“You are beautiful, no matter what they say. No words can bring you down ...”
Watching the clouds, breez is brushing your hairs.
You feel that need.
You feel that desire.
You feel that love.
You are the best that I’ve ever seen.
“We are beautiful, no matter what they say. No words can bring us down ...”
We are strong enough, no matter what they do. We can make a real life together.
We can walk on the beach, while our hands are tied and our hearts are thumping.
Yes, we are the one.
The strongest spirit that sea has ever met.
Roxrider_USA said on May 10, 2003 21:22:
@Mel: Cute!! I relly enjoy reading these. keep it coming, amor.
Carlos E., New York.
kachina008 said on May 10, 2003 22:01:
um.
ok.
im not a prude, or a lonely bitter woman, or someone who hates herself and her life and all that...
and I think its really really sweet that people find love online, *i* did.
that being said, I do think that these displays of affections on here between you guys, aaso and roxrider are a little uncomfortable to me to read. I know that I dont have to read em, i can ignore them, but not really tho, can i, when i see them in many different threads? I feel like im infringing on private moments that should be shared between you guys and you guys alone. u know what i mean?
so *big breath* what im trying to say is, if it isnt too much to ask, that you guys tone it down on TDR a little? sorry if you feel like it is not my place, but i really hope that you understand my point.
good luck to you both! :)
xuxa said on May 10, 2003 22:14:
For those who speak portuguese here it is a poem from my favourite poetess:
Amiga
Deixa-me ser a tua amiga, Amor,
A tua amiga só, já que não queres
Que pelo teu amor seja a melhor,
A mais triste de todas as mulheres.
Que só, de ti, me venha mágoa e dor
O que me importa, a mim?! O que quiseres
É sempre um sonho bom! Seja o que for,
Bendito sejas tu por mo dizeres!
Beija-me as mãos, Amor, devagarinho...
Como se os dois nascessemos irmãos,
Aves cantando, ao sol, no mesmo ninho...
Beija-mas bem!... Que fantasia louca
Guardar assim, fechados, nestas mãos,
Os beijos que sonhei prà minha boca!...
(Florbela Espanca)
Aaso said on May 11, 2003 04:36:
Kachina!! Its not all the threads. This is only this thread! Btw thanx for your comment! But I can not do what you want :)
Roxrider_USA said on June 13, 2003 23:37:
@Xuxa: Are you from Brazil, Portugal, Mozanbique or Angola ?
Seems like you are a Xuxa Meneguel fan!! Am i right ?
Later!
Carlos E., New York.
TinyBubbles said on June 14, 2003 04:59:
As far as i know, there aren’t really many Portuguese left in Mozambique. Or Angola for that matter!
Santi said on June 14, 2003 13:55:
I think Xuxa is from Lisboa.
She’s not the Brazilian singer :D (Ilarie Ilarie Ilarie eh oh-oh-oh... Ilarie Ilarie eh oh-oh-oh :D)
Roxrider_USA said on June 14, 2003 19:05:
@TinyBubbles: I know that, friend. i’m refering to the official spoken langauge of those countries. As a result, it’s easier for the TDR user Xuxa to know the singer since Brazil exports a lot of its culture to other Portuguese speaking countries.
@Mel: Xuxa is a children’s music singer and children’s show presenter in Brazil.
@Santi: Yep, i know. Seems like you know her songs.
Carlos E., New York.
Aaso said on June 14, 2003 19:57:
oh really carl??Xuxa ... heheh lolzzz... are you a Xuxa fan?? By the way I love your nick ;)
Roxrider_USA said on June 14, 2003 20:00:
@Mel: When i was a little boy i used to be. However, not anymore.
BTW, I miss you! Muahh! :-)
Carlos E., New York.
Roxrider_USA said on June 14, 2003 21:32:
Hello guys!
Here I Will Stay Loving You:
Here i will stay loving you
wishing that i could materialize there
in front of you
to at least, oh yea, to at least
touch your lips with my fingers
and for a moment feel the warmth of your lips through my fingertips
i wish
i want
but we can’t
i can’t
i wish
i want
oh yeah
just to touch your lips
just to see your eyes
just to feel the fragrance of your perfume
i wish
i would have you here
Here i will stay loving you
i’ll stay missing you
i’ll stay wanting you
one more night
Carlos E., New York.
Roxrider_USA said on June 17, 2003 15:20:
@Xuxa: You must really love children, am i right?
Or is it just ’cause you like Xuxa?
@Mel: Muahh!!
Carlos E., New York.
xuxa said on June 18, 2003 21:11:
@Aaso & Roxrider: I’m not a Xuxa fan lolz... I was her fan when i was a kid, i think all kids must love her!! . Xuxa is the name of My little sweet dog ( I think it’s a cool name for a dog lol) ,and I remembered that the first time I came to TDR:DD
By the way, I really looove children, like the real Xuxa :DD
@Santi: mmm I’m not from Lisboa:) I live in Lisboa since I came to the university. I have finished my studies and I’m still living here. My hometown it’s not very far from your country:D (1 hour by car) :)
LittleSpooky said on March 24, 2003 20:03:
Oooh... pass