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Your opinion please: My demos.
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Roxette-atic said on September 17, 2005 17:43:
Hello every1!
I have written and recorded some demosong ( not Roxette-covers, my own) and I just wanted to know what you guys think of them. Im not really a singer, but Im searching for someone to sing them for me. Anyway, here are the two songs:
INTO MY ARMS:
http://s30.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2M3QLARE4QF1221X7SB1E6HBAZ
ALWAYS GIVE YOU TIME:
http://s30.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=15RQ68BT7H6BM10VD3HSQQC3RD
chrisjankunas said on September 19, 2005 06:38:
Being brutally honest (EDIT:SPELLCHECK)
INTO MY ARMS - I liked the chorus and the “Insanity” part. The arrangement is great but I feel a bit bored during the verses - it could be the words or it might just be a boring voice (Sorry, but I DID read what you said about the singing)
I don’t like the way ARMS is first said.
Other then that, I quite like this song!
ALWAYS GIVE YOU TIME - I think you should take your own advice and slow down. I think this could be a brilliant ballad without the bass and at a slower speed. Expecially if sung with a Marie like voice. Maybe some instrumentation for the end ! (EDIT2) I think your vocals for the chorus are quite good!
I hope this offers some advice ! Well done !
coyboyusa said on September 19, 2005 12:58:
hello per jr :)
into my arms is pretty darn good, but liek per some of your verses sound liek run on sentences.
giv you time, hmm i dunno the timing of your vocals ewith the arrangement are off, and your vocals are oddly loud too
Roxette-atic said on September 19, 2005 18:42:
Thanx for you opinions guys!!. I will think about what you have written when I record new demos.
Yea, I know the singing could be better..anyone in Stockholm interested?? =)
gessle-addict said on September 17, 2005 21:59:
I liked both of them very much. Congrats!